Friday, December 7, 2007

BBB3 script... Scene one anyway

Only got one scene done, but here it is.


Officer O’fficer is relaxing at his desk, when a mysterious figure enters completely enshadowed, There is a small black haired girl at his knees.


Officer O: Hey, “Hairy”, we happen to have a dress code for this station. You have way to many shadows on you, please hang them up on the coat rack.
“Hairy”: I’d say it’s rather rude to blame me for the shadows cast over my face, considering the abysmal lighting in this office is hardly my responsibility.
Officer O: Well, Excuse me! But Lieutenant O’fficer over there was trying to read a murder novel, and SOME of us wanted to help set the mood for him.
“Hairy”: I’m beginning to see why it was so easy to just walk into this building...
Officer O: And you’ll find it’s just as easy to walk out-ta.
“Hairy”: I caught wind recently about a bank robbery in your quaint little city, that was perpetrated by a grey child with red hair.
Officer O: There was also a rabbit with h-
“Hairy”: If I came here for a rabbit, I would be asking about a rabbit, but I am not the kind of Person to travel this great a distance just to ask a lowlife slob with a navy blue paycheck he likes to call authority if he’s seen rabbit! Now do you still have the Juvenile in custody or not.

The Bored little girl begins to focus on the police officers desk, a thin twine can be seen falling on it.

Lieutenant O: Oh, we... never pressed charges.
“Hairy”: Why am I not surprise?
Officer O: We ment to, but things just got in the way
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Officer O’: Damn good Sandwiches, kid.
Brian: The Bunny made them. (Purple hair is in Brian's Sandwich)
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Officer O: You know how these things go.
“Hairy”: Well, what’s say we do something about it.
Officer O: Sigh... Look (The way Eric does it). We run far too busy an operation to go after every criminal that takes substantial amounts of money from government insured bankers. If you want these guys, keep us out of it. Just put up a bounty for ‘em and let some professionals take care of it.

As Officer O’ explains to the man what he should do, the shadowed man notices the string along the desk, and then sees his little girl fiddling her fingers idly. He becomes less conserved.

“Hairy”: Yes, a bounty fine. This should cover the reward money for it, have the posters set up and distributed and be sure to make a public announcement when you have your suspects. He grabs the girl by the scruff of her collar and turns her to the door. Come along little Kro*, NOW.

They both walk out to the hallway, and Kro is still fiddling her fingers.

“Hairy”: You can't keep playing games like that when I take you with me Kro. The last thing we need is for you attract any more attention.

Cut back to the Officers.

Lieutenant O’: Do you want me to get started on those wanted posters?
Officer O’: You could do that... or we could take this money and we could-

Cut to Kro’s Hand clenching to a fist. Officer O’fficer’s desk falls into a pile of wood scraps, with the twine barely in view suspended tight above the wreckage.

Officer O’: ...do exactly as we were told and start making those posters.


*I've been rethinking the names of the Other "Brian Robots." For now, Brian Black's name is now Kro.

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